Production

    DRAFT 1

My essay was marked and commented 

Well done Tom, this an excellent first draft that clearly shows great enthusiasm for cinematography and also a high level of research being carried out which is evidenced within the essay and in the bibliography. Overall, the essay is very well written and does what you set out to achieve by answering the question by really getting into the topic. I only have a few recommendations to make, and they are very minor. Mainly around referencing and repetition of text such as the film titles. As said, minor, but will help you out in future essays you undertake. Well done Tom.

For my second draft I changed and tweaked some of the issues that had been outlined in order to have a better essay.